Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s actions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Some people argue that guardians should take legal responsibility from their offsprings' behavior. I completely agree to the foregoing argument because of they serve as the protector of their children and also for the reason that they are the ones that taught values to them. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, plenty of criticisms are laid upon the issue on the liability of child's actions. In this light, parents are the most related persons to involve themselves on their sons and daughthers troubles as they are deemed to care for them in the first place. To illustrate, various minors were arrested for the crime of shoplifting because of insufficient supervision of their parents.
Moreover, individuals are expected to behave appropriately in the society as they already learned right values and conduct utlimately from their guardians since childhood. As a result, whenever they deviate from these standard behavior due to some peer pressure and environmental influence, parents should be the forerunner to take full responsibility of the occurence of untoward incidence caused by their children. For example, homes that are enveloped with undesirable traits can be adopted by teenagers such as rudeness and selfishness and can possibly translated to other people they enncounter. This will all reflect and pointed out to the parents who raise them.
To recapitulate, it seems that guardians are really the main responsible for their sons and daughters conducts due to their authority and learnt attributes from them. Indeed, it will all boils down to parents who would imbibed their child to grow as a good person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...pletely agree to the foregoing argument because of they serve as the protector of their childre...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us minors were arrested for the crime of shoplifting because of insufficient supe...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
... in the society as they already learned right values and conduct utlimately from thei...
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Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...rs such as rudeness and selfishness and can possibly translated to other people they enncoun...
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Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'translate'
Suggestion: translate
...deness and selfishness and can possibly translated to other people they enncounter. This w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28838951311 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86341774125 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4245489569 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238746331595 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852917059259 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309009108815 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146262168379 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250496088454 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.