Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples….
Who is the responsible for children's actions? This is a crucial query of debate which has been dealt for decades. Even though some people believe that parents are the ones who hold the position, others think that government hold it. But, before taking any action, it is important to weigh and see who plays the main role.
First of all, governments are responsible for quality of education. It is necessary to be aware of how good is becoming the education system. It is important to assist children so that they will not make any wrong-doing. For example, in my country the government does not hold any responsibility for children and even for education it functions alike. If a child commits a crime, it goes to a special prison, held for underage.
However, parents are the ones who play the crucial function for children. As they are responsible for feeding, providing a good quality of life and many other welfare. If something unpleasant happens to their children, it is up to them to suffer the consequences. When their child behaves wrongly, they will have to respond for that action.
Finally, until children have completed eighteen years old, it is completely up to parents to take care and assume any children's action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun welfare seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much other welfare', 'a good deal of other welfare'.
Suggestion: much other welfare; a good deal of other welfare
...g, providing a good quality of life and many other welfare. If something unpleasant happens to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87142857143 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71136434266 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57619047619 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.71428571429 408% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6623111617 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0714285714 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215631160602 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826711467564 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510561171485 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132721056676 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450649043407 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.