Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's act. What is your opinion?
The importance of parents' responsibility for their children, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. it can be strongly agreed upon the fact it is the parents' obligation for the actions of their children, however, there has always been some contentions about it. this essay will elaborate my opinions on the topic and thus will lead to a reasoned conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why the parents should be legally responsible for their children's behaviour, but the most obvious one lies in the fact that parents are the ones that spend most of the time with their children. they should have obligation to teach the children right from wrong as it is not all the teachers' responsibility. For instance, a research published recently shows that caregivers are the most important elements in the growth of children. For this reason, the positive impact of nurturing should not be ignored.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that the parents may not fully understand their children as they only spend few hours a day together. According to recent multiple news of teenagers committing crimes such as robbery, stealing and shooting, should the parents be blamed for these crimes? As an illustration, a student shot in the school campus and killed tens of students few years ago. The families of the victims are blaming the parents because they should be responsible for the action of their son. however, personally, I do not think it is fair to just blame the parents.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of parenting is prominent, however, the parents should not held all the responsibility for the actions of their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04498269896 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79210239387 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550173010381 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9206931478 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450675025015 0.242375264174 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154742281404 0.0925447433944 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119881460774 0.071462118173 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296985587976 0.151781067708 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709305123607 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.