Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that parents are the one who are legally held responsible for every act of their off springs. Critics, however claim that society plays an equal role to for children’s act along with parents responsibility. In my opinion, former argument is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the main features of this statement before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that parents should be responsible for children’s acts. Firstly. the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that parents are the main character who involve in upbringing of their children. Therefore, they legally responsible of their children acts. As a prime example, parents are the one who teach their child about honesty, discrimination between right and wrong, and trust and they are the main contributors of making character building of child.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that society has some rule to develop the changes in person according to the situation. But this statement does not hold fully water. Hence at last, satisfactory and proper upbringing is the main thing that the child acquires from parents that allows him to deal with the critical situation of life in proficient way.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that parents should not only regally responsible for children’s act but also the one who guide their child to deal with every situation of life. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27480916031 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90193829158 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2532868047 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331191096224 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114199966317 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113703743305 0.071462118173 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19813922694 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102505414023 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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