Humanity has witnessed incredible inventions in past century including antibiotics, airplane, and computers. They all have influenced people in many ways and helped them to achieve many milestones. In my opinion, the most important invention of last century is computers and this essay will describe how data computing and internet has changed the world.
At the outset, before computers data computing was done with the help of some automated tool which had many pitfalls. Advent of computers and super computers have certainly increase the speed, accuracy of data computing which is required in many fields including life sciences, space exploration etc. Computers provides accurate data in few milliseconds or nanoseconds which helps researchers to go the next step in their research. To cite an example, imagine a diagnosis of blood cells gets wrong, the whole prescription will be wrong. There are many medical equipment which uses the computers in analyzing the medical data. Moreover, artificial intelligence is based on computers which is considered as next major step in the field of technology.
Moreover, the advent of internet has changed the medium of communication. Earlier communication used to take more time between two people and they used to wait for response for many days which has been changed drastically due to internet. People can discharge their duties and shared the report through internet to their peers and supervisors. In the field of education, internet has enabled many students to read enormous amount of study materials which was not possible without internet.
In conclusion, this essay has discussed how data computing with the help of computer has influenced many fields which has been helpful to humanity and tool "Internet" has drastically changed the life of common people. In my opinion, computer is the best invention of last century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40878378378 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94709057542 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8592528581 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981110938316 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422499017641 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579310301561 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797095489364 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745190687208 0.0609392437508 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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