Whether the most vital invention of the previous century has been in the medical, scientific, or technological field has been discussed widely. Although each field has its own advocates, this essay will discuss why the most significant advancements have been in medicine.
In the past, people used to die from various infectious and contagious diseases such as chicken pox, measles, mumps, and plague, known as the black death. However, advancements in medicine saved millions of lives. Doctors and researchers have studied symptoms of various diseases and discovered numerous bacteria and viruses causing dangerous diseases as well as their treatments and preventive methods. Particularly, antibiotics and vaccination have largely rendered many conditions obsolete worldwide. Without these advancements, many scientists and inventors would have been died before being able to make any change in the world.
On the other hand, researches in medicine have long been working on genetic disorders. They have now a profound knowledge of human DNA, its combinations and effects on our bodies. The advancements in this field have enabled professionals to examine parents' genes before pregnancy to ensure healthy babies with no obscure or difficult diseases or mother-borne conditions are born. Their attempts have noticeably increased the number of healthy newborn infants.
In conclusion, I strongly believe although we have witnessed a countless number of progressions in different fields including science, technology, and medicine, medical advancements are significantly more important because of their internationally big scales and effects on human health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89711934156 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07111155667 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658436213992 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3810955335 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155870283718 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545803602201 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430805898237 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926114596826 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517243921737 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 11.5310837438 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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