People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in urban areas and rural areas.
Now in modern era everyone wants to live in metro cities or in big cities and where they can get lots of facilities what they want. Moreover people are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. Because today’s children want everything from their area. I will discuss advantage and disadvantage of living in urban areas and rural areas.
Firstly, when people go to urban area they get better employment. Moreover people can earn too much money that they didn’t earn in past. After that they get more business opportunities in metro cities they can get easy work. In big cities people can go to morning walk because in every parks are available in every nuke and corner of these cities. Further more in these cities people can get proper medical facilities. For example emergency call number that help people to cover a person from danger 40% safe because of these type of facilities. At the last the metro cities increase the level of life and people live there life safe and comfortable
Secondly, living in urban area is good but rural areas have their different type of lifestyle in rural area people live fresh minded and without any worries they live pollution less life like they do not use machines. Moreover they less use of vehicles. In rural area there was clean environment. At the last in rural area there was cheap accommodation available like in villages people should not give bill of water supply and there was cheap food facility. Moreover government makes a rule of less billing of electricity.
To conclude, I think that both are good but it always depended on people’s thinking some want to live in rural area some in urban area
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80689655172 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42613593043 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503448275862 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4440554151 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488933770534 0.242375264174 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186386771512 0.0925447433944 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.210636876958 0.071462118173 295% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343157883242 0.151781067708 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147742837922 0.0609392437508 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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