People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend colleges and universities?
People primarily enrol in a university or in college to achieve a necessary education and experience, they required to build a career. Apart from career, people go to college or university to gain higher knowledge, to enhance their social status and to learn more about diverse cultures. This essay will discuss my view that why people attend colleges and universities and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, the first and foremost, people go universities and colleges to get the necessary education and degree which is prerequisite to build their career. Those certificates help them to get a decent job and survive in the world. For example, many MNC asked to have at least a graduate degree to start from the lower level job so universities and colleges help people to earn well which eventually increase their social status as well.
To continue with, some people who are blessed with inherited fortune, they seek to gain higher knowledge and want to learn more about diverse cultures. That knowledge, then they implement in business growth and ultimately expand their business. For instance, Jaipur Rugs owner’s son attended college to understand the diverse cultures and their need and that knowledge helped him to enhance his inherited fortune and now they do not only export in Western market but also export in Asian market. Therefore, some people go college and university to obtain more knowledge.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that people enrol themselves in colleges and universities to gain more knowledge and to get a decent job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19615384615 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74963956756 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526923076923 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2995188259 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.818181818 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.25397266985 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368507273382 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153240021444 0.0925447433944 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987483190806 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238258913427 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769636799653 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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