Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of personal development and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of individual career is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am tremendously inclined to believe that personal development can be a plus, and I will analyse that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, personal growth can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of respect to others as well as the enhanced knowledge, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the practical skills. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both the career analysis and the one’s communication ability apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, personal attitude might increase the consequences of leading society in the wrong way. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of the wrong attitude could relate to this reality that the demerits of dangerous attitude pertain to kill someone’s life. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious college has asserted that the downside of the horrible communication is correlated negatively with the performance ratings. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of the professional career.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of personal development far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of the good nature prove the significance of professional growth , but also pinpoint social implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the significance of professional growth , but also pinpoint social implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69172932331 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28915299166 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5736830342 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183989068457 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607396967775 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439947965834 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100714927679 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343711128178 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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