Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is very important for a person to progress in his career by improving his personal abilities and characteristics which will make him superior to others in his field. There are other factors which hinder the process of personal development, but they should not stop somebody to achieve his goals.
Personal development acts as a foundation stone in building the professional life of people. Those who want to achieve their goals should continuously polish their skills by attending training, seminars; be vigilant of the new technologies and always ready to adapt to those. Studies show only a 20% share in success comes from technical skills while personal attributes contribute the rest 80%. So, it can be easily said that personal development is very crucial in someone’s professional life.
There is also an opinion that the lack of resources and facilities come into the way of some people who want to excel in their careers and get top positions. This includes insufficient funds, nonavailability of good and reliable education and means of transport, etc. But there are many examples of some businessmen who started from a very average background and with their persistent measures became very successful in their lives. This sums that although resources play an important role yet to achieve better career goals the things which matter include persistence and commitment.
To conclude the aforementioned text; although money and facilities are important yet with continuous improvements in personal attributes people can meet their career goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38211382114 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98823347404 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6595001713 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.363636364 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 7.25397266985 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142952556802 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060695249472 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691329318567 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820846025699 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487192286268 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.