Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In todays world, there has been a serious upsurge among prodigies regarding the influence of personal development in professional growth. While some people inevitably agree to the mammoth role played by personality in professional life, there exists some contrary views as well. This article shall discuss the indispensable role of personal refinement in career blossoming.
At the onset of society, there has been a plethora of arguments regarding the correlation between personal and professional growth. A well defined and groomed personality can have significant impact on career establishment. For instance, a survey conducted by myself as a university student discovered that personality augments the professional advancement. Corporate biggies claim the influence of personality that aided in the elevation of their professional ladder was immensible.
However, in the realm of profession, the key role of experience cannot be ruled out. Career establishment and upsurge also stems out from experience and hand on skills which play an irreplaceable role. Dedicated hard work is a pivotal facet of climbing up the corporate ladder.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds that personality is not only a leading factor in professional development, but also guarantees a stable and socially healthy life. Hence the advantages of personality outweigh the role of experience and skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ees a stable and socially healthy life. Hence the advantages of personality outweigh ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8125 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30164571995 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4807544016 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201674651171 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071191327921 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384177913778 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115479779728 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593022266138 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 53.1260098522 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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