Personal Development is the base for professional
development and advancing in one's career. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of role of personal development in the professional growth and development of one's career was always a debatable topic. Even though, many people claim that personal growth plays an major role in career propagation. Others reject this notion and argue that personal development has no significant impact on professional development. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would further elaborate both sides with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, in present running competition world, organizations are looking for candidates with good personal skills. Personal development helps to improve talents and potential which is required to achieve success. Secondly, it helps to improve awareness and identity which in turn creates your own name in the office and build trust. For example, interpersonal skills are required to interact with clients, onshore team on daily calls and to communicate our completed status to them clearly. Finally, personal growth stands an employ in good stead as far as professional career is concerned.
On the other hand, critics may point out that personal skills has nothing to do with the professional growth. They believe that it entirely depends on the performance and how efficient they perform their job. For example, performance ratings are totally dependent on how well employee performed the job and delivered the product within the deadline.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that professional growth is highly dependent on your personal development skills. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that to achieve success in one's life interpersonal skills plays an vital role.
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- Some people believe that academic subjects such as chemistry, physics, and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking. 77
- University only requires to apply digital media rather than continuously upgrading textbook. Agree or disagree 80
- Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it? 55
- Creativity is inborn skill or can be developed through learning? your opinion? 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52592592593 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99587278974 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0051846252 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182887344699 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619241855933 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556050267237 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107254977744 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361808591931 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.