Polygamy has led to massive divorce rates around the globe. Give the possible option for this issue and various solutions to reduce the rate.
Nowadays, the crisis of polygamy has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether the problem of polygamy can be addressed by informed decision or not?”. It is a widely held view that the rate of the polygamy must be reduced, whereas I tend to believe that one must eliminate carefully this challenge and find an appropriate solution.
To begin with, it is a common belief that polygamy has led to damaging consequences in each society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that the inheritance dispute, domestic violence, and mismanagement the resources of the family are rooted in polygamy. Secondly, it could be argued that polygamous children often suffer from depression and they easily are tempted by delinquents and subsequently committed to crime. In addition to this information, a group of sociologists, working at prestigious university conducted that in polygamous society man seeks a single or young woman to have a partner and his wife get rejected.
However, there is no doubt that numerous solution must be taken into account to address this crisis. One possible approach is that the women must raise public awareness and get informed about their rights. The alternative approach would be toughest regulations should be obtained by the government to diminish this unethical behavior.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that accurate solution to reduce polygamy must be taken into consideration in order to have a safe and secure community. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...days, the crisis of polygamy has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the toughest'.
Suggestion: be the toughest
... rights. The alternative approach would be toughest regulations should be obtained by the g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33571428571 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05727636558 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9494659303 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131547659729 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433336404448 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352774910159 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726511119503 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184105180356 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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