As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
An average human life is increasing due to prominent advancements in medical science, which have sparked a heated debate. While some people think that it can tremendously affect the natural order of life, others maintain that this is a positive development for mankind. This essay will discuss that increasing human life span can have contrasting effects with an example.
To commence with, scientists have reached a breakthrough in the field of science, which tends to increase life expectancy of men and women. This cutting-edge technology has its own pros and cons for example, curtail food and mineral resources of earth, which are essential for human race to survive. That is why live more than an average person will affect the overall population of the Earth. However, many proponents said that this treatment is not available for every person, but only to certain categorize including scientists, engineers and doctors because they worth more than an average person.
Despite the lamentable effects of increasing human lifetime, from a general standpoint it can also have potential benefits. This applied not for every person, but for those people who are playing crucial role in the development of major technologies. For instance, research done by MIT has proved that if an intelligent person can live more than an average person then he will be giving the opportunity to serve the society more with his knowledge. Moreover, increasing human life span is not always an answer for sophisticated problems on this planet such as critical needs of food and other resources.
In conclusion, everyone has different perspective about increasing human average life is beneficial or not still remain unsolved. In my opinion, doctors have dissimilar emphasize about their research, but the main fact is they must scrutiny all the possible outcomes before testing on a living thing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26910299003 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77224957592 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5567324589 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292433094273 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109824139718 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528359355129 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177717445218 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805205105741 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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