As a result of advances in medical care. Average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an aging population for individuals and society? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
The world has witnessed a myriad of advancements in the health sector over the last few decades. As of today, we are now living longer than in the past due to the development of medical care. Whether this phenomenon is a boon or a curse is questionable. This essay will illustrate the demerits of increased life expectancy following a pragmatic approach.
First and foremost, aged people are not a helping hand in the society rather a burden. Most of the older people are physically unable to perform work and contribute to the society. A recent study conducted by the University of Oxford in the year of 2013 suggested that about five percent of world's GDP is eaten up by the increased number of older people. Furthermore, the elderly people also intensify the unemployment problem at a great level throughout the planet.
To add to that, living longer for both man and women also causes many social problems. Aged ones are mostly in a need of support of other to move around and live along. Take the example of a friend where he got four elderly which sometimes makes his family members cry as they need to carry forward an intense nursing of them, regularly. Therefore, they are not feeling happy at all inside of their hearts.
To finish off, increased life expectancy might not be preferable to most of us as it breaks down the social balance in many forms. However, it is expected that the aged people would be an asset to the society in the time ahead when further technological advancement will take place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62683783441 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1090687564 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251572037856 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698704365887 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499337290564 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131457646672 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441157654865 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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