Smoking in public areas and open areas should be banned. some people believe that restricting people from smoking in such areas is an act of snatching their freedom? To what extend do you agree or disagree?
I agree with that act that is smoking in the public area is restricted. That’s why every year 30th may is celebrated as a nontobacco day. To create awareness about the causes and effects of its consumption. But some people thought that, this act grab their freedom. It’s a wrong perspective of the people.
Why this act is implemented is, to minimize the pollute of air in the environment. if someone smoke in the public is also affect the people those who are surrounded him. Moreover people are thinking it’s an attitude to impress some one. But they don’t have sense about its very harmful to our health.
In our democratic country all are having their own freedom to consume anything is their own wish at the same time understand about other people.so smoking in open areas is not advisable, you can smoke privately.
In the packs of tobacco, the warning sign is mentioned as “smoking causes cancer”. So be aware of smoking in public areas. Increasing the price, reduce the production, create awareness about smoking is bad. These are all the control measures of smoking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 186.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02688172043 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77090431829 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0467201643 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7857142857 104.977214359 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 20.9669160288 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288582964628 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091365234966 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10548524927 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168877668949 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566044758966 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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