Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it is often said that important people are born with certain characteristics that enable them to become great leaders. The alternative view is that leadership is a learnable quality.
Personally, I agree with the latter viewpoint because training and experience are more important than innate ability in this situation.
it is somewhat true that many individuals are born with distinctive personality traits that allow them the opportunity to become talented leaders. leaders tend to be those who are charming and persuasive. In contrast, those who lack these characteristics may have difficulty inspiring the belief and loyalty that all leaders require and end up as followers rather than leaders. For instance, a salesman who often fails to convince his clients to sign a deal may be dissuaded from becoming the sales team leader since he does not believe that he has what it takes to be one. The more convincing salesmen are more likely to rise to that role.
However, there are also people who assert that leadership skills can actually be achieved through proper training and effort. that is why there is a larger number of institutes offering leadership training programs helping those who want to learn the skills required to be a leader. public speaking is one of the many skills these schools can teach.
Individuals who are shy and lack confidence can find their feet in the leadership battle by learning the essence of good body language, pronunciation, and other elements of good public speaking. this will in turn make them better leaders.
In conclusion, although some traits related to leadership are likely inherited there is tremendous room for people to grow into positions of responsibility if they apply themselves fully to learning the skills and personal characteristics of great leaders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 5.94088669951 269% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23208191126 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8704309405 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57337883959 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3013633034 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212275282561 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708198550201 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053773421706 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103336099185 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596722102351 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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