Some effective people like repetitive routine such as eating the same food, do you like this way? Discuss your views.
Nowadays, the attitudes of some effective people to have a repetitive routine life have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether following repetitive routine lifestyle is a reasonable decision or not?”. It is a widely held view that providing challenging and diverse life is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that changing your lifestyle plays a vital role in the fast-changing societies. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that those who reluctant to alter their life have a limited ability and framework and refuse to experience new occasions. Secondly, it can be argued that following stable routine shows lack of self-confidence and being accustomed to your wrong habits that lead to deterioration and regression. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that revolutionizing the lifestyle help you to expand your horizon to a new idea.
However, there is no doubt that repetitive routine provides people with various positive points. It should be taken into account that the supporters of sedentary lifestyle think that they are more likely prosperous people and could have a stable life in terms of job opportunity and relationship. Moreover, advocates of repetitive routine suppose that changing your position is a big obstacle to reach sustainable situation.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that disregarding a repetitive routine in order to have efficient life must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e a repetitive routine life have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35395189003 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17192368958 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0054373521 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192924513239 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646681017894 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413320188365 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111696700969 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396428080834 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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