Environmental pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, the question “whether environmental pollution must be addressed by individuals or not?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that enjoying safe environment is highly beneficial, whereas one must weigh up the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that managing the range of contaminant plays a vital role in society. First and foremost is that since an extensive range of pollutant is emitted from factories that contribute increasing the range of heat must be prevented by the government. Secondly, it can be argued that the defective cars that pollute the air by their toxic gases should be ignored. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that by the greenhouses that are emitted from factories the ice poles will be melted and subsequently the sea level will be raised. A group of scientists working at prestigious university conducted that lethal gases assist to the destruction of the ozone layer that is detrimental for human health and it is not rational that just the government undertake the responsibility of this problem.
However, there is no doubt that the majority of people believe that the individuals are more blame for this matter. It should be taken into account that if people use comprehensive transport system instead of private car we will be able to benefit from the clean environment. Moreover, people can participate in running campaigns to raise their public awareness to reduce contamination of environment
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that some useful actions must be taken into account to overcome the problems of the environment. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce strict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...by individuals or not?' has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20529801325 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03277999275 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3503428468 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.909090909 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217886478953 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763408708745 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631872302773 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113702987135 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553812239755 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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