Some organizations integrate employees in the decision-making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Some organizations integrate employees in the decision-making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual argument, a constructive diagloue on the advantages and disadvantages of employees involved in an organization's decision-making process can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of arguments that exist on either side, there are more advantages than disadvantages. Through the course of this essay, I shall put forth my points and calculations by considering both sides of the argument.
Benefits associated with employees being involved in an organization's decision-making process are numerous. One of them is that employees bring a lot of practical experience of working in the organization. This is because they have been associated with such organizations and faced similar situations earlier. It is important to note that consulting with such employees can reduce the time and cost involved in the delivery of goods and services. It can also be observed that employees will be motivated and feel more empowered if they are involved in decision-making process.
As every coin has two sides, integrating employees in the decision making of goods and services of an organization are also associated with a few disadvantages. Firstly, there more risks of information leakage about companies customers. Then there are cases where personal information of its customers was sold to a third-party. For example, the social media giant, Facebook was held accountable for sharing personal information of its users to a third-party company breaching the trust of its users.
I see there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided and hence my opinion is that if employees are involved in the organization's decision-making process has more advantages. I am inclined to believe that employees involvement in decision making will help the organization to save time and cost and put them ahead of their competitors though it has a few disadvantages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual argument, a constructive d...
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...nformation of its customers was sold to a third-party. For example, the social media giant, F...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...vantages. I am inclined to believe that employees involvement in decision making will hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, third, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46557377049 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45990043866 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527868852459 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9783114266 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.071428571 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343540623201 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110513957023 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891546934545 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195000021434 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569901341419 0.0609392437508 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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