Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Space exploration has become integral part of our life. It plays vital role in providing us knowledge on discover various devices to help human to ease the day-to-day life in Earth. However some people believe that space research is a waste of money. I completely agree that exploring and examining outer space renders paramount offers to human and explain with suitable examples.
To begin with, researching on space can give multifarious benefits to the human habitats which is helping the people to lift out from various issues. Furthermore, satellite is a significant output of space research which forecast weather climate to help people to aware about heavy rain, hurricane, and other natural calamities. For example, in 2015, Chennai had escaped from huge hurricane with help of weather forecasting and save lot of lives. Moreover, advanced technologies like mobile phones, internet are using the GPS device to locate the people at any part of the world, which secure people from crimes.
Adding further, space exploration brings another opportunity to human beings to live in another planet. Effective research in space is finding the other planet where it has any suitable climate to support humans to live if any unconditional climate change occurs in Earth. As a result of this, governments and special corporates are spending a heap of money to construct space station in sky.
In conclusion, as for the benefits of space research is providing a lot of offers to medical as well as in education. So people has to pay their attention to space research and contribute their support to nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...n to ease the day-to-day life in Earth. However some people believe that space research...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, as for, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14122137405 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71482193587 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6302510923 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.615384615 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327965266985 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122615468182 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841183236946 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193908157161 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812484609807 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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