Some people could stay effective in their lives by doing the repetitive routines, such as eating the same diet. Do you think it can apply for everyone.
We live in the most technologically advanced era in the history of civilization yet many people are not creative and are following a fixed routine in their day to day life. While proponents argue that following a fixed pattern has many benefits, others claim that a routine pattern is a hindrance to development. This essay will describe the advantages of leading a routine life and why it is not applied to everyone.
On the one hand, there are few professions that require people to follow a strict daily pattern such as bodybuilding and athletes. Firstly, the professionals of the aforementioned jobs are required to adhere to the routine very strictly and they will not deviate from them. For instance, many Olympic contestants follow rigorous exercise and practice from a very young age. This enables them to compete at the global level. As a result, few jobs require following a strict pattern which will help the person achieve his goal.
On the other hand, many fields require creative thinking and cannot follow a definite pattern in their daily lives. Professions such as an artist, a filmmaker, and a choreographer are in need of innovative thinking to stand out of the crowd. Furthermore, these artists venture out to an unknown location to get new ideas that will be implemented in their next creations. To illustrate, the director of the film "Bahubali" wandered across many locations to find a suitable location for the spectacular screenplay. Thus, some jobs require a person to be creative and cannot be routine.
This essay described that a person's employment is directly proportional to his daily routine. In my opinion, irrespective of an individual's profession, our life should not be static and we need to venture out once in a while for a varied experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06060606061 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07585294506 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521885521886 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8626217796 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903410193727 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310429781854 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272396634672 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515675936812 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253100239942 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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