Recently, the phenomenon of a tendency to play team sports and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that individual sports' tendency cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the advantages of playing team sports are far, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to prefer team sports playing than individual sports. At first, for some people, it seems to play individual sports due to their abilities to play single sports. However, the benefits of group sports are more than other kinds of sport. For example, group sports teach young people how to do teamwork.
In addition, the possibility of the championship is more in single sports activities. But, team sports are like a school for athletes. From a recent scientific research undertaken by a reputable university, a significant number of schools in advanced countries encourage the students to due group sports by constructing group sports fields such as Basketball and volleyball in order to increase their communication skills, which are beneficial for society.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both side, I profoundly believe that the benefits of team sports membership far outweighed its drawbacks. But not only for championship goals also for social activities.
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also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.375 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01198742068 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3815655779 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280788211919 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107788681472 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093368043882 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157294182045 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109522056717 0.0609392437508 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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