Recently, the phenomenon of different views among people about departures in foreign travel and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate, although contested by many that spending holidays in resorts cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that traveling to ancient countries can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support a journey to a country with a rich history to get now their customs and cuisine. At first, if we travel to an old country we can get more familiar to it its past history by the existing signs. For example, by visiting the ancient buildings of historic countries such as the Pizza Towel in Italy people can learn more the past centuries of that country.
In addition, people can spend their holidays in a country to learn about their traditions and their different ways of cooking. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers has shown that a significant number of travelers tend to spend their time in countries such as Turkey and Iran to become more familiar with their old clans. The tourists can learn about their traditions and foods.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the benefits of spending the leisure time in a country with rich nations far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08467741935 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8299184574 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552419354839 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4805014343 50.4703680194 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.111111111 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244858672851 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107053446578 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624603896032 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138272735149 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674063583425 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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