Since the invention of the computer, it was an opinion that the computer would make us more productive. Although many claims that computer has made us more stupid and less productive, I am inclined to this belief that its impacts have been as thoroughly more constructive and positive. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze why I agree with most.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support computer productivity in providing goods and services. At first, one disadvantage with the computer is made us less physical motion and exercise. However, the rate of works has become faster than before by computer. the rate of mathematical calculations by computer is higher than the human's mind. For example, in many mathematical operations such as banking and financial operations have become easier and faster than before.
In addition, the capacity of computer's memory is lower than of human's mind. But, the computer memory works more accurate. human errors have no any place in computer operations. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2012 has shown that a significant number of errors related to careless of human such as false in minus and plus have removed after the advent of the computer.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the impacts of the computer on our living. I profoundly believe that the benefits of the computer are far outweighed its drawbacks in the human's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12809917355 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78661031531 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574380165289 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8515747353 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24450227769 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889385046842 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703273181973 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138701924854 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458647908401 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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