In this day and age, spending too much time at work have made people busy and they have not enough time for their personal life. Although today, it is hard to escape from the phenomenon of working a lot for more income, people are losing their best times of life by working a lot. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this statement as a right view. At first, although people work to more income for well-being, by working until the night they will hardly have free time for personal life. they would be involved in a uniform life and depression. For example, late coming to the house in every day due to hard working is a sign of
ordinary life and having no time for spirit recovery.
In addition, while people work too much to make better future for their family, it makes them away from their families. they can not spend a lot of time with their children in the family. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MTW Univesity researchers in 2014 shows that a significant number of school children complain about their busy parents and loneliness at home.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, my personal sentiment is that spending too much time at work brings many issues for the personal living of the people and their families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68163265306 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38174369746 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3198365872 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.272727273 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507003702586 0.242375264174 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208106522739 0.0925447433944 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968206828241 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293782682877 0.151781067708 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101085904421 0.0609392437508 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.