Cities are now expanding. The government should make better public transport or should build more roads to facilitate car ownership?
The phenomenon of cities became large than before and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that creating more roads is highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that making better network for the public transportation can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin whit, there are various reasons to develop network for public transport by the government for large cities. At first, more roads for cars make the traffic roughly and easier. However, the government should encourage people to use public transportation due to its disadvantages. For example, there are many negative effects whit travelling whit personal cars such as producing greenhouse gases and crowded highways.
In addition, repairing and creating roads for cars make the travels safer. But, it cannot help solve the governmental issues such as environmental pollutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 31.9359605911 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 1207.87684729 71% => OK
No of words: 156.0 242.827586207 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49358974359 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03065506965 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679487179487 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 379.143842365 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9863421045 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257646433218 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993159749443 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697045896045 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154229126885 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562806362477 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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