Recently, the phenomenon of being highly interested in the space travel, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate, Although contested by many that spending money on this fantastic journey cannot be highly beneficial, such a voyage regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the problems on the earth's surface are in priority, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to focus our attention to the issues of the earth instead of travel to other planets. At first, space travel is highly influential to enhance the level of human knowledge about the universe and galaxies. However, space travel needs a huge budget that faces the governments to many financial problems. For example, for space travel, scientists need to build expensive machines such as space shuttles, space crafts, and doing many studies about galaxies, which falls the governments in many financial issues.
In addition, the space travel helps the human to find another planet to live. But, there are many issues on the earth that should be solved be thinking about space discovery. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2018 has shown that a significant number of environmental issues such as air pollution, greenhouse gas emission, climate change, and garbage in ocean waters can be solved by the budget of space discovery.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the benefits of solving the environmental problems far outweighed of space travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34090909091 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87838912709 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.3088230621 50.4703680194 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383952112716 0.242375264174 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149300661317 0.0925447433944 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582604959497 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213028537693 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483368925216 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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