some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. which opinion do you agree with?discuss both options and give example?
The importance of pets which was always datable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject the notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversry over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that pets are good companion of human beings and they are loyal with their owner. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that pets are also source of entertainment that’s why children like to spend more time with pets than electronic gadgets. Needless to say , all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these argument and which can certainly one is that manys animals have aggressive nature by which they hurts to children. Besides, pets are not health conscious they spreads the flue diseases. Hence , it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the the benefits of keeping pets at home are indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17105263158 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67658403182 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9122655601 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163978027945 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518568723844 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463234759592 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907044458748 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301573704361 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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