The trend of pet-keeping is now becoming a common hobby among individuals of all ages in the world. Some people consider this activity to be in favor of their children, while others believe that it to be menace and detrimental. This essay will argue why adapting pet animals is good.
There are two major reasons why certain folks are against this activity of pet-keeping. Predominantly, there are few animals which are not suitable to keep as they might cause harm to householders through biting them. For instance, there have been a plethora of cases when a pet like dog, cat, bite their owners; exposing them to the diseases that are incurable. Secondly, the germs in their hairs and breath are also considered to be harmful for humans as they can cause breathing and skin problems like asthma, allergy and many more. That is why; people consider pets to be a threat.
On other hand, another bunch of people consider this hobby to be good for their wards because they opine that such activity can influence the behavior of their child. This is because pets like dogs are proven to be best companion of humans and its loyalty is remarkable. Also, domestic animals are one of the great sources of recreation among children. In this contemporary world of gadgets, they may find playing with pets to be better than wasting time by sticking to the screen of mobile phones, television, computer, et cetera. That is why; keeping pets is useful in numerous ways.
In conclusion, this essay argued why animals should be given a place in home. In my opinion, it is better to consider domestic animals to be friends rather than humans because of their loyalty and companionship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...is because pets like dogs are proven to be best companion of humans and its loyalty is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54644359843 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0811913646 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142099541964 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550228459259 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340677984772 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949887277217 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051344607892 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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