Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals factors influencing child's development has been pne of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People have always held some conflicting opinions about this. This essay looks both sides of the argument.
Undeniably, family plays a crucial role in shaping children's future. This is because, child first step of learning start from his home only and parents are considered as their first teachers. Therefore, it depends on the families atmosphere that will illuminate the future of an infant. To put this into perspective, if a family is educated and has a well standard of living will obviously effect the life standard for forth coming generations too.
However, there is no doubt that social activities also prove to be a great factor in deciding individual's fate. The reason for this is, spending times with friends provides them social interaction and improves their psychological mind. Moreover, infants imitate what is being showed in television. As a case in point, they dance to music, when the celebrity dances in a video.
To conclude, we cannot deny that social activities and interaction with people effects the child's development. However, in my opinion, family impact in shaping child's future weighs far more than it.
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2466367713 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79229282018 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686098654709 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1767068521 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5714285714 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179267391616 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549219944467 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463208448437 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10532199046 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643846183872 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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