Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Other believes that a women’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children’s. Which opinion do you agree with and why?

It becomes a debatable topic in recent time that women should be given equal rights or not in society. Some people support the equality rights of women whereas some people oppose it. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both arguments in detail.

To begin with, let's talk about why women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their career. Intelligence does not belong only to men, we have so many women scientist who invented so many things and won the Nobel prizes as well for their inventions. Every person can excel in their career if the right opportunity is given to them. For example, Madam Quree won the Nobel prize for her invention in the field of physic.

However, some people believe that a women's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. They argue that men's role in society is to go to work and earn money, and a women's role is to take care of family only. They have conservative thinking that women can not go to work and that is not good as per their society.

To conclude, In my opinion, women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers because we are living in a developed society and every human being has equal rights and freedom to take his or her decision.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, whereas, for example, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22857087895 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.690318356 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2727272727 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47274219977 0.242375264174 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186681012779 0.0925447433944 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157283185712 0.071462118173 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287369033304 0.151781067708 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718998917025 0.0609392437508 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.5310837438 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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