The evolution of this world from agricultural era to information technology generation is a result of development in science and technology. This development is driven by some people’s curiosity and interest to explore. They believe in practical implementation of their gained scientific knowledge. However, on the other hand, inclination of some of us towards this implementation is negligible.
Artificial Intelligence, exploration of Mars is some of the successful projects of today’s time where practical implementation of scientific knowledge has played a great role. Scientists, researchers or other technical personnel have contributed to the human society at large by finding solutions to every current day-to-day issue. Their meticulous analysis of the problem has led to many new inventions.
However, on the other hand, the other part of society studied science only for scoring good grades in school. Higher percentage of these individuals is more inclined towards other aspects of our learning, namely, art & literature, history and business administration. Their interest in these fields has bestowed society with great artists like Van Gogh, Picasso etc. It is due to their efforts and deliverables, the human society is able to witness and gain insight in rich human history.
In conclusion, both types of individuals go hand in hand to develop and nurture the society in which we live in. It depends on every individual in which field they would like to develop and grow their interest and career.
- Many people buy products that they do not really need and replace old products with new ones unnecessarily Why do people but things they do not really need Do you think this is good thing 78
- Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money.What is your opinion? 67
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 61
- some people want scientific knowledge for the knowledge only whereas others want to practice this in particular field. Which one do you prefer? 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48523206751 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20272816408 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599156118143 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2811246074 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172629007039 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583426500289 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468121501892 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965167912449 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353434440688 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.