Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools, especially at the preschool level. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Music and its teaching within school and preschool had been created arguable debates amid scholars, scientists and teachers. Learning music and art alongside other subjects and its pros and cons have frequently been discussed, I will express music and its divers sectors advantages from early ages through this essay.
Music and its effects upon increasing pupil’s mind activity and creativity as the first and most significant reason is strictly inevitable. This effects has not only prompt their learning process speed, but would affect on unused part of mind which has not been engaged previously. A research in 2014 by Pennsylvania University prominent scientists has illustrated correlation positively between learning music and mind brain function.
Another perspective, has represented that music and other art sectors are profoundly effective to expel and foster children’s talent. Lots of genius’ talent have been flourished within their early age. Beethoven whose masterpiece symphonies had been consistently admired by music-masters, as one of the Most prominent person who has changed societies attitude to music has started his first music learning in childhood.
In Conclusion, teaching art and specially music alongside other subjects in our modern and sever life to subtilize children education, enhance their mind activity and creativity and illustrate pupils’ talent have entirely been mingled with school and preschools environment. Plenty kind of art type as well as music would perform a momentous role during childhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78787878788 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9611022499 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6541412216 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.7 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115434628306 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049036166007 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032826930398 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785775011626 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288854367496 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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