Some schools put all exam at the end of the year while some other school give exam throughout the whole year, what are the advantages and disadvantages of it, which one do you think is better.
These days, the Education system plays vital role in student's academic career, some of the schools held exam at the end of the year, while some of school held throught an entire year. As such, there are both merits nd demerits to this trend. I will elaborate further in this essay.
To begin with demerits, an exam at the end of the year have many disdvanatges that student does not focus well on their study, they only approach two or three month before exam to prepare well, hence, they became lazy and do less attention on their academic. As a result this trend make a negative effect on students academic life.
Furthermore, an exam during whole year gives student to an involving habbit because students must have to be active for test and be prepare for all over a year. As an example, in 2004, Delhi Public School's Student got higher grades in board exam compared to private schools because both schools has their different exam pattern and their level of attention for studies is also raised than others.
To sum up, i completely thinks that the
Schools, which held exam during entire year have best way to make a positive outcome for students bright future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71844660194 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21954573269 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626213592233 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 379.143842365 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6052176748 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302606609151 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11295712617 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107963289655 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150818056141 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782991272163 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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