Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on dangerous sports should be banned or not can lead to thought-provoking discussion. My viewpoint is that irrespective to the numerous arguments that exist on either side, I believe that extremely dangerous adventure sports should not be banned, and I will discuss the same in the following paragraphs.
There are several reasons in favor of my stance. To commence with, people are enthusiastic about playing such games which consist risks and dangers such as Bungee jumping, Sky diving, rock climbing, etc. However, the government should give safety guidelines for making it safer. Furthermore, so many companies and organizations are sponsoring this type of sport. They have taken care of safety guidelines; moreover, they are also organizing a training program for said sports.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that this type of sport has so much fame and money. After succeeding in these sports, the players get so much of money and fame. They break records set by others and when they do so, the name of their country shines in the world. This shows that adventure sports have so much fun.
In the end, there is no reason for banning this type of dangerous yet adventurous sports since people will indulge in these sports in hiding which will prove to be rather more dangerous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: Skydiving
...sks and dangers such as Bungee jumping, Sky diving, rock climbing, etc. However, the gover...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10434782609 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7720451664 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647826086957 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5129953925 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21311820497 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713711369919 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487627646326 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12718872419 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267587863465 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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