Home-schooling is better when compared to the traditional schooling methods—agree or disagree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on home-schooling and traditional schooling can lead to thought-provoking discussion. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist on either side, home-schooling is not better than conventional education. There are many flaws in home-schooling, and I discuss the same in the forthcoming paragraph.
There are several reasons in favor of my stance. To commence with, Home-schooling is not recognized anywhere and not associated with any board of education so far getting admission in the university, and students may get trouble. There is no standardized system of examination and pattern of syllabus. Furthermore, there is very less student in the class, but competition between students is very less. Home-schooling has no subject-wise faculty, so sometimes what happens teacher cannot deliver precisely to the point.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that traditional schooling has its benefits, such as learning by competitions with other students, increased confidence, and better communication. Moreover, there are many other co-curriculum activities organized by a school that can help students explore their skills and improve their ability. In addition to that, traditional schooling has so many branches of study, and every department of education has a particular highly qualified teacher. Also, the conventional school has a part-time tutor who can solve the doubt of students in the break time.
In conclusion, I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments that I have provided, and hence my opinion is that the advantage of traditional schooling is more than home-schooling.
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| 2019-12-25 | Abhi Patel1212 | 100 | view |
| 2019-05-22 | ajayaryanone | 77 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66287878788 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43685453912 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3831168594 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308870340568 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101608371098 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717594176045 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191943395226 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626000404215 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.