Some types of emploment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women' To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and exmples from your own experience.
In pastime, men used to work only extrinsic works whereas women intrinsic in this world. But these gender dominated societies have changed a lot due to literacy rate grown recently. Some people believe and emphasize that every task is defined appropriately for gender while other percentage argue that work belong to masculine and feminine are cross linked to each other and doers should not treated with gender dependency. This essay will discuss both views by analyzing this argument and explore the logical conclusion.
To start with, people believe in gender inequality for general work have myriad reasons. One of them is suitability as per gender and alleviate as per ease with gender. For example, to feed baby, mainly female is solely responsible. In addition, these people believe male are physical tough and deal adequate with outside works such as truck driving, defense etc. These people tend to oblige with female to pursue the heredity defined process.
On contrary, other people argue that male and female are equally responsible for any issues and can handle each other's task. They mention that in today's technological era, females have provided epitome and conspicuous testimony to prove that they have potential to make it. For example, Kalpana Chawla astronaut was famous personality and emerged as heroic in her field. People says not to restrict any potential and emphasize to secede this heredity from ancient time.
In recapitulate, this essay discuss both views of this argument, In my personal opinion, any task should be defined in boundary of gender's potential. I believe in today's lives, people are emphasize this notion and females are providing their espouse in nation's growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24452554745 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50213026614 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602189781022 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1199345784 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155238676452 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541868668158 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315875921645 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954974329116 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320848606051 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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