Owing to the enormous environmental problems, many people think it is prudent to spend money in solving these problems instead of exploring space. Despite offering benefits from space exploration, I agree that environmental problems must be resolved without delay. This essay will discuss this and offer unbiased conclusion.
To begin with, Space exploration has caught the imagination of different scientists of several countries. They have started sending shuttle to space to explore the possibilities of water, minerals, and life. To cite an example, few years ago the USA has sent a non human shuttle to explore Mars which has been a success and scientists are very hopeful for possibilities of life on Mars based on the information which was sent from shuttle. Therefore, space exploration could offer many benefits to humanity.
On the other hand, environmental challenges such as global warming and extinction of species have to be addressed immediately before it goes out of hand. One of the main environmental issues is global warming in which the Earth temperature has been rising for few decades and it has shown the deleterious effects on earth. Polar ice melting , frequent occurrences of flash flood, hurricanes, drought are some of the effects of global warming. In order to solve these problems government and authorities need to invest money in energy conservation and renewable energy sources so that carbon emission can be controlled significantly.
To conclude, space exploration can offer many benefits to humanity; however the immediate challenges of environmental issues must be addressed because if earth and humanity suffer then their is no point in exploring space.
- Student travel to study is overrated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies? 77
- There are more men or women in certain jobs and there s nothing we can change about it Do you agree with that 77
- In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory. Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting? !f voting is compulsory in a democratic society, what are some conclusions we can draw about the nature of democracy? 56
- Nowadays it is noticed that cultural mixing is reflected within local cultural practices. Do you think it is good for the society? 84
- The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems...so who do u think Should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individuals? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and life. To cite an example, few years ago the USA has sent a non human shuttle...
^^^
Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to explore Mars which has been a success and scientists are very hopeful for poss...
^^
Line 6, column 341, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ious effects on earth. Polar ice melting , frequent occurrences of flash flood, hu...
^^
Line 6, column 405, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...of flash flood, hurricanes, drought are some of the effects of global warming. In order to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 468, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...global warming. In order to solve these problems government and authorities need to inve...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 584, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion and renewable energy sources so that carbon emission can be controlled signif...
^^^
Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...cause if earth and humanity suffer then their is no point in exploring space.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43018867925 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00531169014 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8173350841 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252135588125 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924737835331 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769519688529 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124763788851 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736388032027 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.