sports and game create disturbance in students life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies. do you extend do you agree or disagree.
Sports and games are mandatory in all the colleges and schools due to its various benefits. Some people believe that sports and games create disturbance in the student’s life because they cannot fully focus on their studies. However, I am totally disagree with this opinion .
According to me, sports and games cannot be neglected as it helps in keeping the body fit. Moreover, it helps student to stay away from the various diseases and problems like headache, fever, and obesity and diseases like diabetes, heart attack , so on . It improves concentration power of scholars so that they can study properly. For example, If a pupil is a sports student then his or her body and brain development will be better and faster than non sports students . Sports students are more active and energetic as compared to others .
Also, other advantages of sports are that it creates awareness about many illness. It reduces stress and burden. Moreover, Sports helps in developing different qualities like unity , discipline , cooperation and leadership qualities. For example, students who have capabilities and abilities in the physical activities then also can make their carrier in the sports . This can also make their name and fame. It also contributes in the development of the country. Therefore , sports and games are necessary in the student’s life.
To sum up with , Students should manage their schedule to do study and play sports daily. As sports and games can change the life of the scholars by giving them lifelong benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16465863454 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74662598908 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7856410982 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6470588235 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335808301238 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101061546985 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101465259612 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214746094679 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536372339042 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.