Taking part in sports is important for an adult's health and happiness. To what extent do you agree with it?
Recently, the phenomenon of involving in sport teams and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of exercising is highly beneficial, such issue is regarding thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that physical activities can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, an adult's health can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of powerful bodies as well as wellbeing are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, I performed an academic experiment which discovered decreasing cronic diseases. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both men and women apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, hapiness might increase the consequences of the mental health. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of living happily could relate to this reality that the demerits of going to the gyms pertain to losing weight. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted the downside of running correlated negatively with walking. Hence, it is correct to persume the preconceived notion of this attitude.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the anticipate in group activities far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of better life prove the significance of decreasing sadness but also pinpoint possible implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
... essay. From a social standpoint, an adults health can provide the society with som...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...profoundly believe that the benefits of the anticipate in group activities far outweigh its dr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54285714286 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13708985813 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681632653061 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3342573821 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941392063403 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263505341852 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338665636012 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046111256703 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316812846364 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.