In this technological world, the number of new inventions has been increasing. Please describe a new invention, and determine whether it will bring advantages or disadvantages.
The impacts of new inventions, which frequently generated a great deal of heated debate, has now become even more controversial. While some people believe that there are some advantages from the increasing number of new inventions, others claim that otherwise. This essay will discuss both sides of the debate, and thus lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why increasing invention can be benefit for the modern world, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it can provide the positive effects to the hospitals as well as the school. For example, a study conducted at Latrobe University showed that in Australia 60% of the students can study online through modernized laptops. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of modern invention are remarkable
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that the technology industry has affected the nature, and caused serious environmental problems due to the ways of producing the goods. For instance, a survey conducted at Melbourne University proved that 60% of participants didn’t want the government to build up new technological companies in rural areas. Hence, predicted outcomes of harmful inventions are critical.
In conclusion, while there are many strong arguments on both sides of the debate, I strongly believe that the advantages of new inventions outweigh the drawbacks. I would strongly recommend that it is important for people to use new inventions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97448484359 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.084631543 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231973334841 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849832357676 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430363095743 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128555703202 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332727250263 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97448484359 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.084631543 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231973334841 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849832357676 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430363095743 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128555703202 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332727250263 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.