technology and new inventions is it beneficial or detrimental to the society?
In today's scenario, world is accelerating and each day there is a new invention is coming in front of us. The importance of whether the recent developed technologies and innovations are beneficial to the society or not was always a debatable topic. Even though, many people claim that recent developments and inventions are wide spread in every field and it is beneficial to mankind. Others reject this notion and argue that advancements in technology has impact on human relationships and health. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would elaborate both sides and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, innovations and developments in technology has benefited mankind in field of science, media, telecom, medicine, study, applying jobs and many more. For example, when we think about innovation and technology first thing that comes to our mind is computers. Computers are invented to help mankind to perform their daily routine activities. It helps us to get the required information of any field related to banks, schools, jobs, medicine, travel, cooking and many more.
However, there are many disadvantages of advancements in development of recent technology.Humans spend most of the time on computer and smart phones which is leading to health issues. Most of the people are addicted to the technology innovations like play stations, games which halt their brain development. For example, innovation of smart phones made people become more lazy and decrease in physical activities.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to point that development and advancements in technology has made human life much more easier. In a nutshell, even though innovations has many disadvantages, but its benefits outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: invention
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...nvented to help mankind to perform their daily routine activities. It helps us to...
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...dicine, travel, cooking and many more. However, there are many disadvantages of...
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Suggestion: Humans
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... in technology has made human life much more easier. In a nutshell, even though innovations...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, thus, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44876325088 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1465275373 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600706713781 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0702429987 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180655751586 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568477257881 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625185377109 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101944596025 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929787891975 0.0609392437508 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.