Teenagers are influenced by media and commit crime discuss?
The sustainable influence of media in teenagers has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent years .it can be agreed that teenagers are impacted by the media and mass industry. this essay will elaborate how youngsters follow media and television and thus will lead to increase in number of crime rate and also media is necessary as it connects people with each other.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why younger generation is attracted by media and gossip , hence indulge into illegal activities. As we know, media is biggest source of information and it is easily accessible for everyone . media has an audio visual impact that creates a broader vision , so therefore the message it delivers is easily understood. hence the wrong message can easily be captured.
On the contrary, media is the huge source of entertainment these days, also it is a bridge between people and government . All the illegal activities can be exposed very easily and help in catching criminals .it has the power to help people know the truth and reality. Moreover, it makes people updated about other people and their regions.
To recapitulate, media has both sides good and bad and one side cannot shadow the other one. media plays a crucial role and helps people become aware of surroundings but on the same point media should not interfere in anyone’s lives. also , media should be careful to deliver the right messages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, moreover, so, therefore, thus, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07851239669 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62448748654 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611570247934 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5488053361 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.416666667 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22027719957 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722181480771 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654239697355 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12817179257 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896820180843 0.0609392437508 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.