Television shows and its impact on society
Now days social media is controversial subject of many questions and there are positive as well as negative impacts on population. I'll explain the it's dependability’s in this essay.
To begin with, all the young generation is following to the famous celebrities and having the merits and demerits as the frontlines are whom they are following and what is the background they came from is always matter in this case. For an example, Mr. Akshay Kumar leading actor in Bollywood and become the very successful person in his personal as well the for the nation. The generation who is putting step into his footstep will be lead to our nation one day and we will feel proud for them.
In addition to that, some negative points also need to be considered compare with above one. Few role models identified, as they partially moved towards the negativity and a kind of bad people. To link these all there is impact on people growth. In current scenario, the public is taking about only the social media and internet.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that, merits and demerits are there. Hence before concluding the same. I would like to be finalised from my personal prospective i.e. the television has positive as well negative impact society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87735849057 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76873533159 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63679245283 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9580437441 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1666666667 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900455346857 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335568239748 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497818199583 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064576020455 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048035843654 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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