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In this day and age, has become a controversial topic/debate among public all around the world, it is a widely held view that the individual should be ,while I tend to believe that

First and foremost, from social point of view are indeed inbound to which means it might lead to both and , For instance a group of reputable working at prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study, to understand the relationship between.
Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that is positively correlated with not only but also .

Second of all from economic terms, are undoubtedly attributable to , in that it would lead to , as well known example of such attribution is a research done by Tehran university which has shown that , thus could play a significant role in favorable future.

In conclude, while there are several arguments on both sides, my personal sentiment is that the benefit of far outweigh its drawbacks.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... held view that the individual should be ,while I tend to believe that First an...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to which means it might lead to both and , For instance a group of reputable worki...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...positively correlated with not only but also . Second of all from economic terms,...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tively correlated with not only but also . Second of all from economic terms, a...
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Line 6, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...c terms, are undoubtedly attributable to , in that it would lead to , as well know...
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Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tributable to , in that it would lead to , as well known example of such attributi...
^^
Line 6, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y Tehran university which has shown that , thus could play a significant role in f...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 1207.87684729 66% => OK
No of words: 155.0 242.827586207 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14838709677 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99624765332 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722580645161 0.580463131201 124% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 379.143842365 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.5024630542 185% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.944737784 50.4703680194 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.5 104.977214359 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.75 20.9669160288 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.25397266985 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.242375264174 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0925447433944 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151781067708 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 12.6369458128 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 53.1260098522 62% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.9458128079 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.3980295567 165% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.5123152709 200% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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