Test
This morning while commuting to the office along with Parbhjeet (My old boss from Xuber) and Pankaj Payal (Xuber Implementation Manager), I was in a pensive mood about my finances and was reading a book called "The Richest Man In Babylon".
I am like this book because it is nicely written and the approach towards managing money is extremely pragmatic. I liked the part where the author said: "A part of whatever you earn is for you and NOT all". I was perplexed and bewildered about this sentence.
The obvious questions came to my mind was: Why not all which I earn is mine?
The author is this book beautifully described this as, whatever I earn is not all mine because from that earning I have to pay to my landlord, my car loan, my house EMI to the bank and home expense. Basically, I pay to everyone except me- the one who worked hard to earn all the money. This is true, I never paid to myself as the way I pay to the bank, to the landlord, and to the car insurance company. This is fair. Not fair at all at my end.
So, fast forward to today when we are commuting to the office. I narrated this story to Prabhjeet and he listened calmly and after ruminating for a while he said: "Change you Reporting". I was confused and looked at him and he said again change you reporting man! and report to yourself rather than report to anyone else.
This hits me hard like a rock and I started pondering about it and realized that this makes complete sense to me. If I report to myself then I know where I stand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you earn is for you and NOT all'. I was perplexed and bewildered about this...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...exed and bewildered about this sentence. The obvious questions came to my mind wa...
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Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d was: Why not all which I earn is mine? The author is this book beautifully desc...
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Line 13, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...This is fair. Not fair at all at my end. So, fast forward to today when we are co...
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Line 17, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...he said again change you reporting man! and report to yourself rather than report t...
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Line 17, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rself rather than report to anyone else. This hits me hard like a rock and I star...
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Line 21, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d that this makes complete sense to me. If I report to myself then I know where I ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 20.9802955665 257% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60777385159 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66267957666 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554770318021 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 4.6157635468 303% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.1981838843 50.4703680194 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 7.25397266985 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.242375264174 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0925447433944 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151781067708 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.1260098522 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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