Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Excercise and balanced diet is the basic building block for the good health; However, sometime people think that excercise on is sufficient to have good health. Whereas, many other think that healthy life can be achieved by having only balanced diet. this essay agrees to the fact that excercise is the key if you want to be in the good shape.
Firstly, there is no question that good and balanced food schedule will make you fit but this is not only the solution to have good health. For example, eating only balanced diet will help to maintain the muscles in you body andwill be not sufficient to gain muscle mass which is essential element to good health. Hence, it is evident that having only healthy food is not only the solution for better fitness.
On the other hand, regular excercise is considered as on of the best way to manage your overall healthy lifestyle. For instance; having regular workout will not only help to build you body, but it will also take out the toxic substance from your body in the form of sweat. Hance, it is proved that having a disciplined workout schedule will help you to achieve better healthy life.
In conclusion, it is important to understand that, in order to have a good health, you should have a regular workout and excercise plans. With the help of diet you can only sustain a better body, but with the help of excercise you can obtain a good health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29015632654 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456 0.580463131201 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0138690563 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.0 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169200480187 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813491892458 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549289945264 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118718225733 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601256911005 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.