People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
People are having different reasons to join formal college and universities and some of the key reasons are gaining in-depth knowledge, having a better experience, preparing for promotion in career etc. This essay will try to delineate some of the key reasons why do people consider to attend college or universities.
Firstly, in my opine, obtaining more knowledge by higher education is one of the key reasons for people to attend higher educational institutions. They want to grow their knowledge in a specific area of field so that they can help to develop the field. For example, in the latest survey conducted by National Study Council or NSC, during 2015 to 2018, 87% of students who registered for a Ph.D course in US universities are looking to enhance their knowledge in a specific field of study. Hence, it is very evident that people attend universities to gain more knowledge.
Secondly, Nowadays, achieving better career prospects is also related to higher educations. Pupil goes to universities to satisfy the growing demand to obtain specific knowledge in their job. Many employers want their employee to gain higher education so that they can contribute better in their business. For instance, according to a study conducted by National Employee Union or NEU in Canada, more than 80% of working executive enrolled for the higher studies in universities because of the growing demand in their current job. So, it is proven that getting promotions is also one of the key reason for people to join universities.
In conclusion, people joining universities or colleges for various reasons, sometimes for higher education or better job, but the key reason boils down to the fact that they want to gain more knowledge so that they can grow themselves.
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Suggestion: consider attending
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11034482759 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81413960003 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8523023646 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355507225086 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140606341528 0.0925447433944 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876989743561 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247197527259 0.151781067708 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795816527691 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.