There are social,medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. do you agree that the problems overweigh the banefits of mobile phones
In the modren era the mobile phone is very useful for every person. with the help of mobile phones we are study easily.Every person use the mobile phones some people use the phone to do business and work easily.with the help of mobile phones we will do online shopping,online billing,online working this is also save the time because when i use the online shopping then i cannot go to the maket to buy the things.When i feel bored then i sing the songs with the the help of mobile phone.I use social networking which is also very helpful to communicate with other countries.I know so many peoples with the help of social networking.with the help of the internet students know more information about the study some students are interting in studies they gain more knowledge with the help of mobile phones.Mobles phones have some disadvantages also some people use mobile phones day night it is very harmful.it ios affected our eys .some parents cannot care his childrens they give the mobile phones for small childrens it is very dangrous they cause so many diseaes like heart attack because people carrying his mobile phones on upper pocket then phone attached with heart it is very harmful.so in this eassy i say that mobile phone has advantages and disadvantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...phones we are study easily.Every person use the mobile phones some people use the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82949308756 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69210421207 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511520737327 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6551724138 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 108.0 20.5024630542 527% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 564.5 50.4703680194 1118% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 524.0 104.977214359 499% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 108.5 20.9669160288 517% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292607819626 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228798066303 0.0925447433944 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054913987755 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292607819626 0.151781067708 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 55.6 12.6369458128 440% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -38.14 53.1260098522 -72% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.4 10.9458128079 415% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.92 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.9 8.32886699507 143% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 45.2 10.3980295567 435% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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